Hey, this was a bit broken from the technical standpoint and the first few choices were completely pointless but overall, not a bad story! I very much liked the framework and how you portrayed the protagonist's emotions when confronted with someone from her past. Also, the voice acting was really well-done.
You probably don't care about my opinion, but you could expand this into a really nice commercial VN. As vanilla as the story is, it hits all the right notes for a yuri fluff game. You'd only need to expand it a bit and elaborate on Tomoyo's character and her past with the protagonist...
Anyway, I'm just rambling at this point... Still, nicely done!
I don't have a Mac so I'm not sure. But I think you just need to open the .app file. Maybe you have to allow apps from third-party sources in the security settings.
I don't think that's the issue I'm having. I have opened my system preference and enabled the app to be opened. The one with .app extension, as you could see from my screen shot, is Application(Intel). I think that is why I cannot open the application.
hi i have some feedback on your V.N. that keeps crashing out on both Windows and Linux and as over 1 years on LINUX now i had the crash auto logged turned on so i got the full details of the crash and what triggered it.
thanks
Mr GaTeZ.
traceback.txt
I'm sorry, but an uncaught exception occurred.
While running game code: File "game/screens.rpy", line 724, in execute File "game/screens.rpy", line 724, in execute File "game/screens.rpy", line 729, in execute File "game/screens.rpy", line 429, in execute File "game/screens.rpy", line 429, in execute File "game/screens.rpy", line 438, in execute File "game/screens.rpy", line 441, in execute File "game/screens.rpy", line 447, in execute File "game/screens.rpy", line 450, in execute File "game/screens.rpy", line 452, in execute File "game/screens.rpy", line 461, in execute File "game/screens.rpy", line 462, in execute File "game/screens.rpy", line 729, in execute File "game/screens.rpy", line 731, in execute File "game/screens.rpy", line 763, in execute File "game/screens.rpy", line 767, in execute File "game/screens.rpy", line 778, in execute File "renpy/common/00barvalues.rpy", line 285, in get_adjustment value -= self.offset TypeError: unsupported operand type(s) for -=: 'NoneType' and 'int'
-- Full Traceback ------------------------------------------------------------
Full traceback: File "renpy/common/_layout/screen_main_menu.rpym", line 28, in script python hide: File "/home/gatez/Desktop/Neighbors By Chance 1.0/renpy/ast.py", line 922, in execute renpy.python.py_exec_bytecode(self.code.bytecode, self.hide, store=self.store) File "/home/gatez/Desktop/Neighbors By Chance 1.0/renpy/python.py", line 2218, in py_exec_bytecode exec(bytecode, globals, locals) File "renpy/common/_layout/screen_main_menu.rpym", line 28, in <module> python hide: File "renpy/common/_layout/screen_main_menu.rpym", line 35, in _execute_python_hide ui.interact() File "/home/gatez/Desktop/Neighbors By Chance 1.0/renpy/ui.py", line 298, in interact rv = renpy.game.interface.interact(roll_forward=roll_forward, **kwargs) File "/home/gatez/Desktop/Neighbors By Chance 1.0/renpy/display/core.py", line 3007, in interact repeat, rv = self.interact_core(preloads=preloads, trans_pause=trans_pause, pause=pause, pause_start=pause_start, **kwargs) File "/home/gatez/Desktop/Neighbors By Chance 1.0/renpy/display/core.py", line 3418, in interact_core root_widget.visit_all(lambda i : i.per_interact()) File "/home/gatez/Desktop/Neighbors By Chance 1.0/renpy/display/core.py", line 566, in visit_all d.visit_all(callback, seen) File "/home/gatez/Desktop/Neighbors By Chance 1.0/renpy/display/core.py", line 566, in visit_all d.visit_all(callback, seen) File "/home/gatez/Desktop/Neighbors By Chance 1.0/renpy/display/core.py", line 566, in visit_all d.visit_all(callback, seen) File "/home/gatez/Desktop/Neighbors By Chance 1.0/renpy/display/core.py", line 566, in visit_all d.visit_all(callback, seen) File "/home/gatez/Desktop/Neighbors By Chance 1.0/renpy/display/screen.py", line 432, in visit_all callback(self) File "/home/gatez/Desktop/Neighbors By Chance 1.0/renpy/display/core.py", line 3418, in <lambda> root_widget.visit_all(lambda i : i.per_interact()) File "/home/gatez/Desktop/Neighbors By Chance 1.0/renpy/display/screen.py", line 443, in per_interact self.update() File "/home/gatez/Desktop/Neighbors By Chance 1.0/renpy/display/screen.py", line 631, in update self.screen.function(**self.scope) File "game/screens.rpy", line 724, in execute File "game/screens.rpy", line 724, in execute File "game/screens.rpy", line 729, in execute File "game/screens.rpy", line 429, in execute File "game/screens.rpy", line 429, in execute File "game/screens.rpy", line 438, in execute File "game/screens.rpy", line 441, in execute File "game/screens.rpy", line 447, in execute File "game/screens.rpy", line 450, in execute File "game/screens.rpy", line 452, in execute File "game/screens.rpy", line 461, in execute File "game/screens.rpy", line 462, in execute File "game/screens.rpy", line 729, in execute File "game/screens.rpy", line 731, in execute File "game/screens.rpy", line 763, in execute File "game/screens.rpy", line 767, in execute File "game/screens.rpy", line 778, in execute File "/home/gatez/Desktop/Neighbors By Chance 1.0/renpy/sl2/sldisplayables.py", line 244, in sl2bar return renpy.display.behavior.Bar(range, value, width, height, vertical=False, **properties) File "/home/gatez/Desktop/Neighbors By Chance 1.0/renpy/display/behavior.py", line 1708, in __init__ adjustment = value.get_adjustment() File "renpy/common/00barvalues.rpy", line 285, in get_adjustment value -= self.offset TypeError: unsupported operand type(s) for -=: 'NoneType' and 'int'
Linux-5.4.0-66-generic-i686-with-debian-buster-sid Ren'Py 7.4.2.1292 Neighbors by Chance 1.0 Tue Mar 2 03:54:07 2021
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I need a sequel to this
This was very cute
Hey, this was a bit broken from the technical standpoint and the first few choices were completely pointless but overall, not a bad story! I very much liked the framework and how you portrayed the protagonist's emotions when confronted with someone from her past. Also, the voice acting was really well-done.
You probably don't care about my opinion, but you could expand this into a really nice commercial VN. As vanilla as the story is, it hits all the right notes for a yuri fluff game. You'd only need to expand it a bit and elaborate on Tomoyo's character and her past with the protagonist...
Anyway, I'm just rambling at this point... Still, nicely done!
hi i found a problem when running both *.exe & .sh, i managed to save the crash log so you can sort it out for a next update !
many thanks,
Mr GaTeZ
------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Neighbors By Chance 1.0
I'm sorry, but an uncaught exception occurred.
While running game code:
File "game/screens.rpy", line 724, in execute
File "game/screens.rpy", line 724, in execute
File "game/screens.rpy", line 729, in execute
File "game/screens.rpy", line 429, in execute
File "game/screens.rpy", line 429, in execute
File "game/screens.rpy", line 438, in execute
File "game/screens.rpy", line 441, in execute
File "game/screens.rpy", line 447, in execute
File "game/screens.rpy", line 450, in execute
File "game/screens.rpy", line 452, in execute
File "game/screens.rpy", line 461, in execute
File "game/screens.rpy", line 462, in execute
File "game/screens.rpy", line 729, in execute
File "game/screens.rpy", line 731, in execute
File "game/screens.rpy", line 763, in execute
File "game/screens.rpy", line 767, in execute
File "game/screens.rpy", line 778, in execute
File "renpy/common/00barvalues.rpy", line 285, in get_adjustment
value -= self.offset
TypeError: unsupported operand type(s) for -=: 'NoneType' and 'int'
-- Full Traceback ------------------------------------------------------------
Full traceback:
File "renpy/common/_layout/screen_main_menu.rpym", line 28, in script
python hide:
File "/home/gatez/Desktop/Neighbors By Chance 1.0/renpy/ast.py", line 922, in execute
renpy.python.py_exec_bytecode(self.code.bytecode, self.hide, store=self.store)
File "/home/gatez/Desktop/Neighbors By Chance 1.0/renpy/python.py", line 2218, in py_exec_bytecode
exec(bytecode, globals, locals)
File "renpy/common/_layout/screen_main_menu.rpym", line 28, in <module>
python hide:
File "renpy/common/_layout/screen_main_menu.rpym", line 35, in _execute_python_hide
ui.interact()
File "/home/gatez/Desktop/Neighbors By Chance 1.0/renpy/ui.py", line 298, in interact
rv = renpy.game.interface.interact(roll_forward=roll_forward, **kwargs)
File "/home/gatez/Desktop/Neighbors By Chance 1.0/renpy/display/core.py", line 3007, in interact
repeat, rv = self.interact_core(preloads=preloads, trans_pause=trans_pause, pause=pause, pause_start=pause_start, **kwargs)
File "/home/gatez/Desktop/Neighbors By Chance 1.0/renpy/display/core.py", line 3418, in interact_core
root_widget.visit_all(lambda i : i.per_interact())
File "/home/gatez/Desktop/Neighbors By Chance 1.0/renpy/display/core.py", line 566, in visit_all
d.visit_all(callback, seen)
File "/home/gatez/Desktop/Neighbors By Chance 1.0/renpy/display/core.py", line 566, in visit_all
d.visit_all(callback, seen)
File "/home/gatez/Desktop/Neighbors By Chance 1.0/renpy/display/core.py", line 566, in visit_all
d.visit_all(callback, seen)
File "/home/gatez/Desktop/Neighbors By Chance 1.0/renpy/display/core.py", line 566, in visit_all
d.visit_all(callback, seen)
File "/home/gatez/Desktop/Neighbors By Chance 1.0/renpy/display/screen.py", line 432, in visit_all
callback(self)
File "/home/gatez/Desktop/Neighbors By Chance 1.0/renpy/display/core.py", line 3418, in <lambda>
root_widget.visit_all(lambda i : i.per_interact())
File "/home/gatez/Desktop/Neighbors By Chance 1.0/renpy/display/screen.py", line 443, in per_interact
self.update()
File "/home/gatez/Desktop/Neighbors By Chance 1.0/renpy/display/screen.py", line 631, in update
self.screen.function(**self.scope)
File "game/screens.rpy", line 724, in execute
File "game/screens.rpy", line 724, in execute
File "game/screens.rpy", line 729, in execute
File "game/screens.rpy", line 429, in execute
File "game/screens.rpy", line 429, in execute
File "game/screens.rpy", line 438, in execute
File "game/screens.rpy", line 441, in execute
File "game/screens.rpy", line 447, in execute
File "game/screens.rpy", line 450, in execute
File "game/screens.rpy", line 452, in execute
File "game/screens.rpy", line 461, in execute
File "game/screens.rpy", line 462, in execute
File "game/screens.rpy", line 729, in execute
File "game/screens.rpy", line 731, in execute
File "game/screens.rpy", line 763, in execute
File "game/screens.rpy", line 767, in execute
File "game/screens.rpy", line 778, in execute
File "/home/gatez/Desktop/Neighbors By Chance 1.0/renpy/sl2/sldisplayables.py", line 244, in sl2bar
return renpy.display.behavior.Bar(range, value, width, height, vertical=False, **properties)
File "/home/gatez/Desktop/Neighbors By Chance 1.0/renpy/display/behavior.py", line 1708, in __init__
adjustment = value.get_adjustment()
File "renpy/common/00barvalues.rpy", line 285, in get_adjustment
value -= self.offset
TypeError: unsupported operand type(s) for -=: 'NoneType' and 'int'
Linux-5.4.0-67-generic-x86_64-with-debian-bullseye-sid
Ren'Py 7.4.2.1292
Neighbors by Chance 1.0
Mon Mar 22 18:13:18 2021
Very well written and relatable with great art. I do wish the ending was just a little bit longer.
Hi, how should I access the game on Mac? I downloaded the pack but did not see any application for MacOS (My Mac is Version 11.0 Big Sur).
I don't have a Mac so I'm not sure. But I think you just need to open the .app file. Maybe you have to allow apps from third-party sources in the security settings.
I don't think that's the issue I'm having. I have opened my system preference and enabled the app to be opened. The one with .app extension, as you could see from my screen shot, is Application(Intel). I think that is why I cannot open the application.
I redownloaded via Itch.io app. Now it's working. thx!
good story and very beautiful art , good voice acting ,good music too , i like it :) :)
Game was awesome can't wait to finish I loved the love interest and the voice acting was incredible too.
hi i have some feedback on your V.N. that keeps crashing out on both Windows and Linux and as over 1 years on LINUX now i had the crash auto logged turned on so i got the full details of the crash and what triggered it.
thanks
Mr GaTeZ.
traceback.txt
I'm sorry, but an uncaught exception occurred.
While running game code:
File "game/screens.rpy", line 724, in execute
File "game/screens.rpy", line 724, in execute
File "game/screens.rpy", line 729, in execute
File "game/screens.rpy", line 429, in execute
File "game/screens.rpy", line 429, in execute
File "game/screens.rpy", line 438, in execute
File "game/screens.rpy", line 441, in execute
File "game/screens.rpy", line 447, in execute
File "game/screens.rpy", line 450, in execute
File "game/screens.rpy", line 452, in execute
File "game/screens.rpy", line 461, in execute
File "game/screens.rpy", line 462, in execute
File "game/screens.rpy", line 729, in execute
File "game/screens.rpy", line 731, in execute
File "game/screens.rpy", line 763, in execute
File "game/screens.rpy", line 767, in execute
File "game/screens.rpy", line 778, in execute
File "renpy/common/00barvalues.rpy", line 285, in get_adjustment
value -= self.offset
TypeError: unsupported operand type(s) for -=: 'NoneType' and 'int'
-- Full Traceback ------------------------------------------------------------
Full traceback:
File "renpy/common/_layout/screen_main_menu.rpym", line 28, in script
python hide:
File "/home/gatez/Desktop/Neighbors By Chance 1.0/renpy/ast.py", line 922, in execute
renpy.python.py_exec_bytecode(self.code.bytecode, self.hide, store=self.store)
File "/home/gatez/Desktop/Neighbors By Chance 1.0/renpy/python.py", line 2218, in py_exec_bytecode
exec(bytecode, globals, locals)
File "renpy/common/_layout/screen_main_menu.rpym", line 28, in <module>
python hide:
File "renpy/common/_layout/screen_main_menu.rpym", line 35, in _execute_python_hide
ui.interact()
File "/home/gatez/Desktop/Neighbors By Chance 1.0/renpy/ui.py", line 298, in interact
rv = renpy.game.interface.interact(roll_forward=roll_forward, **kwargs)
File "/home/gatez/Desktop/Neighbors By Chance 1.0/renpy/display/core.py", line 3007, in interact
repeat, rv = self.interact_core(preloads=preloads, trans_pause=trans_pause, pause=pause, pause_start=pause_start, **kwargs)
File "/home/gatez/Desktop/Neighbors By Chance 1.0/renpy/display/core.py", line 3418, in interact_core
root_widget.visit_all(lambda i : i.per_interact())
File "/home/gatez/Desktop/Neighbors By Chance 1.0/renpy/display/core.py", line 566, in visit_all
d.visit_all(callback, seen)
File "/home/gatez/Desktop/Neighbors By Chance 1.0/renpy/display/core.py", line 566, in visit_all
d.visit_all(callback, seen)
File "/home/gatez/Desktop/Neighbors By Chance 1.0/renpy/display/core.py", line 566, in visit_all
d.visit_all(callback, seen)
File "/home/gatez/Desktop/Neighbors By Chance 1.0/renpy/display/core.py", line 566, in visit_all
d.visit_all(callback, seen)
File "/home/gatez/Desktop/Neighbors By Chance 1.0/renpy/display/screen.py", line 432, in visit_all
callback(self)
File "/home/gatez/Desktop/Neighbors By Chance 1.0/renpy/display/core.py", line 3418, in <lambda>
root_widget.visit_all(lambda i : i.per_interact())
File "/home/gatez/Desktop/Neighbors By Chance 1.0/renpy/display/screen.py", line 443, in per_interact
self.update()
File "/home/gatez/Desktop/Neighbors By Chance 1.0/renpy/display/screen.py", line 631, in update
self.screen.function(**self.scope)
File "game/screens.rpy", line 724, in execute
File "game/screens.rpy", line 724, in execute
File "game/screens.rpy", line 729, in execute
File "game/screens.rpy", line 429, in execute
File "game/screens.rpy", line 429, in execute
File "game/screens.rpy", line 438, in execute
File "game/screens.rpy", line 441, in execute
File "game/screens.rpy", line 447, in execute
File "game/screens.rpy", line 450, in execute
File "game/screens.rpy", line 452, in execute
File "game/screens.rpy", line 461, in execute
File "game/screens.rpy", line 462, in execute
File "game/screens.rpy", line 729, in execute
File "game/screens.rpy", line 731, in execute
File "game/screens.rpy", line 763, in execute
File "game/screens.rpy", line 767, in execute
File "game/screens.rpy", line 778, in execute
File "/home/gatez/Desktop/Neighbors By Chance 1.0/renpy/sl2/sldisplayables.py", line 244, in sl2bar
return renpy.display.behavior.Bar(range, value, width, height, vertical=False, **properties)
File "/home/gatez/Desktop/Neighbors By Chance 1.0/renpy/display/behavior.py", line 1708, in __init__
adjustment = value.get_adjustment()
File "renpy/common/00barvalues.rpy", line 285, in get_adjustment
value -= self.offset
TypeError: unsupported operand type(s) for -=: 'NoneType' and 'int'
Linux-5.4.0-66-generic-i686-with-debian-buster-sid
Ren'Py 7.4.2.1292
Neighbors by Chance 1.0
Tue Mar 2 03:54:07 2021
I'm not sure what causes this. It works for me. I've updated the build maybe you can download it again?
ok i will go check it out !!!